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Portal Chapter 21 Part 1
Apr. 13th, 2011 12:06 amFinally finished Chapter 21 of my Portal novelization! :D All I have left is the final GLaDOS battle and the epilogue stuff. Also lots of editing and making a nice source list. ^_^
LOL IT IS TOO LARGE FOR ONE POST. XD
Notes:
-Find out what level you fall into
-Find out what levels you look over from the offices
-One bit of subtitles is not present in the heard dialogue
-Need to look back through and see if Chell figured out she could push the turrets over herself without a cube
-It's been so long since I've worked on this, lol
-I need more words other than platform, other floor, and level. :|
-Cylinder = tank?
-WHOA, totally found a shortcut, you can bypass the catwalk after the fans. BUT, the offices are interesting, so I guess I'll poke through them anyways.
-I can hear a pellet somewhere, but I can't find it. :|
-The part after going down the elevator shaft sounds weird, but I'm not sure how to make it better.
-You just jump through the portal on the stairs to the top of the overhang, but I liked having Chell pull herself up and over instead.
-This - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wX9Sc88qreg&feature=youtu.be - has a much nicer explanation for Chell popping through portals, need to use her bouncing around like a crazy ninja and go back through ALL the chapters to reflect the awesometude
-Also, might need to revise any sections with turrets to keep Chell from taking damage. Still debating on this.
-Never noticed the deadly floor under the 5-piston room. XD
-Should Chell just hop off the piston or cautiously ride it down?
-WHOOPS, jumped off in gameplay and fell through the portal. Needed to do that, it just was so nicely done, though. XD
-ARGH I dislike the crazy piston section XD
-Chell going through the ceiling portal and landing on the piston is the first real example of "spiced up" inspired from the Boots video. XD
-Was it too much or dumb or what, though?
-Bleh description before getting to the odd, rapid pistons. :|
-Have I gone overboard with the fancy moves? XD
-There's a part in the captions that doesn't have sound. However, I do have the sound for it, so I don't know if it's a glitch. Gonna put it in for more GLaDOS flavor.
-lol, missed a Ratman den, whoops, gotta go back and check it out.
-Before I post, I need to fix some of the quotation marks for signs and things.
-I feel like the first turret area is written badly, but it was a mess to write. XD
-Should Chell assume the broken turret is broken, or take utmost caution anyways?
-OH CRAP I MISSED THE FIRST RATMAN DEN IN ESCAPE. :|
-Went back and found it, there is no reason that Chell'd find it normally, moving on. XD
-This means I don't need to write the third one, YAY. :D
-Beginning of going into the 3rd Ratman Den:
"She looked back to where the other person had written on the wall and noticed an air duct-like opening to the right of it. Curious, she walked that way to investigate.
Chell crouched down to look inside. This spot was different from all the other ones the person had used before, this one had an orange glow and a silver pillar in it.
She crawled inside to take a look around."
-Maybe need to go back through and change some of the turret sayings.
-I decided to not go into detail about picking every turret up and dropping it. I may go back later and change this, but I found it repetitive. :|
-Might go back through and fix some of Chell's caution, based on that video; she has like zero fear of crazy portal antics. XD But, that is from the future so...I don't know. XD
-I am probably overusing somersaults, but I don't care, it's the best way to go through a portal on the ground to one on the wall. XP
Outside Resources:
- http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Aperture_Science
- Some parts inspired by http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wX9Sc88qreg&feature=youtu.be
- http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Ratman
-The sound file somebody posted somewhere
( Wander On Over to Chapter 21 )
LOL IT IS TOO LARGE FOR ONE POST. XD
Notes:
-Find out what level you fall into
-Find out what levels you look over from the offices
-One bit of subtitles is not present in the heard dialogue
-Need to look back through and see if Chell figured out she could push the turrets over herself without a cube
-It's been so long since I've worked on this, lol
-I need more words other than platform, other floor, and level. :|
-Cylinder = tank?
-WHOA, totally found a shortcut, you can bypass the catwalk after the fans. BUT, the offices are interesting, so I guess I'll poke through them anyways.
-I can hear a pellet somewhere, but I can't find it. :|
-The part after going down the elevator shaft sounds weird, but I'm not sure how to make it better.
-You just jump through the portal on the stairs to the top of the overhang, but I liked having Chell pull herself up and over instead.
-This - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wX9Sc88qreg&feature=youtu.be - has a much nicer explanation for Chell popping through portals, need to use her bouncing around like a crazy ninja and go back through ALL the chapters to reflect the awesometude
-Also, might need to revise any sections with turrets to keep Chell from taking damage. Still debating on this.
-Never noticed the deadly floor under the 5-piston room. XD
-Should Chell just hop off the piston or cautiously ride it down?
-WHOOPS, jumped off in gameplay and fell through the portal. Needed to do that, it just was so nicely done, though. XD
-ARGH I dislike the crazy piston section XD
-Chell going through the ceiling portal and landing on the piston is the first real example of "spiced up" inspired from the Boots video. XD
-Was it too much or dumb or what, though?
-Bleh description before getting to the odd, rapid pistons. :|
-Have I gone overboard with the fancy moves? XD
-There's a part in the captions that doesn't have sound. However, I do have the sound for it, so I don't know if it's a glitch. Gonna put it in for more GLaDOS flavor.
-lol, missed a Ratman den, whoops, gotta go back and check it out.
-Before I post, I need to fix some of the quotation marks for signs and things.
-I feel like the first turret area is written badly, but it was a mess to write. XD
-Should Chell assume the broken turret is broken, or take utmost caution anyways?
-OH CRAP I MISSED THE FIRST RATMAN DEN IN ESCAPE. :|
-Went back and found it, there is no reason that Chell'd find it normally, moving on. XD
-This means I don't need to write the third one, YAY. :D
-Beginning of going into the 3rd Ratman Den:
"She looked back to where the other person had written on the wall and noticed an air duct-like opening to the right of it. Curious, she walked that way to investigate.
Chell crouched down to look inside. This spot was different from all the other ones the person had used before, this one had an orange glow and a silver pillar in it.
She crawled inside to take a look around."
-Maybe need to go back through and change some of the turret sayings.
-I decided to not go into detail about picking every turret up and dropping it. I may go back later and change this, but I found it repetitive. :|
-Might go back through and fix some of Chell's caution, based on that video; she has like zero fear of crazy portal antics. XD But, that is from the future so...I don't know. XD
-I am probably overusing somersaults, but I don't care, it's the best way to go through a portal on the ground to one on the wall. XP
Outside Resources:
- http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Aperture_Science
- Some parts inspired by http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wX9Sc88qreg&feature=youtu.be
- http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Ratman
-The sound file somebody posted somewhere
( Wander On Over to Chapter 21 )
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